(The Challenge: Write a story in which every sentence is only five words.)
When
Love arrived, I sank.
I
was a college sophomore.
It
was a wet January.
I
watched him walk over.
My
window pulsed with rain.
Heartbeat,
rain in my chest.
Love
wasn’t what I expected.
Skinny,
like I never knew.
Love
was still and quiet.
Love
drank gin and smoked.
Love
smelled of green pines.
Love
had sad, green eyes.
I
was nervous at first.
I
drank before going over.
Tried
to calm quaking knees.
I
gave Love my favorites-
Slaughterhouse-Five
and Chuck Palahniuk.
He
dog-eared the pages.
In
the dark, we spoke.
The
clock ticked for hours.
We
only heard each other.
Love
was honest and mine.
Love
wrote poetry with fingers.
My
lonely skin, the paper.
Love
crept in that year.
White
pedals wilted on magnolias.
They
bruised on the street.
They
got crushed under boots.
Indoors,
I was never warm.
I
tested the old thermostat.
I
pulled my hood strings.
Love
walked across the campus.
I
watched him walk over.
His
hands thrust into pockets.
Love
wore a canvas coat.
Love’s
glasses dotted with rain.
I
kissed the frozen window.
But
I didn’t feel cold.
Love
came inside and stayed.
But
Love did leave eventually.
Flickered
like a frightened flame.
Then
Love went out entirely.
When
Love left, I choked.
I
coughed, sputtered, sank down.
I
thought I’d never float.
Love
still calls me sometimes.
His
voice low and sad.
I
imagine his eyes, green.
Love
begs and I listen.
We
were a good team.
I
cannot disagree with him.
We
were a good team.
Then
why did I lose?
Why
were we always losing?
Maybe
I’ll meet Love again.
I’ll
watch Love walk over.
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